Is this a good begin to a book?

Around the year of 4015, located almost a million light years away the deserted planet of Trylon was discovered. Space travel had advanced so much that people could travel that distance in less than 10 months. A team of archaeologist went to the deserted planet, trying to find out how the Trylonains lived. Archaeologist soon discovered that they were primitive but an advanced civilization. Also archaeologist came to the conclusion that the Trylonians also looked a lot like humans when some archaeologist found some skeletal remains. The air was breathable to humans, oxygen, nitrogen, and other gases present in earth’s atmosphere were in the Trylonians atmosphere too. Archaeologist planned to stay there for 10 months, excavating the site. But one day, some team was excavating the site when they came upon some scrolls written in Trylonian language. 6 years later when archaeologist arrived back from Trylon they were able to translate the scrolls. What was written on the scrolls was shocking. The scroll unveiled a great story of this demi goddess named Azul. Archaeologist were amazed on how persevered it was sense it was believed to have been there for over 5,000 years. The scroll taught archaeologist alot about Trylonians way of life. But mostly important it talked about how Azul saved her people from her dad’s wrath. Archaeologist decided that this story needed a name. They called it “The Epic of Azul: Goddess of the Trylonians.” The story was kept secret for many years until the scrolls were stolen, and every sense then nobody has talked about Trylon. When all of Trylon had seemed to be forgotten the scrolls were found abandoned on the road side near Mexico. To this day it is still not known how the scrolls got there, but with the scrolls came a book. It was a book about Azul the book talked about Azul and her evil father, and how she stopped him from killing all her people. And now here is the story, the story that had been forgotten for ages “Azul and the Goddess of the Trylonins.”